DragonballSP and DragonballWC have been completely dead for a long time. I decided to take this as a chance to make my project better and to improve the writing. I decided to combine plot elements of DragonballWC and DragonballSP into one comic/fanfic. The result was DragonballNG [Next generation]
Eight years have flown by since Super Yi Xing Long was defeated along with the
negative energy that took form from within the dragonballs. Everyone thinks that the
threat has been destroyed…. But! They don’t know how wrong they are…
DragonballNG Tail one
Over at the area in which earth’s warriors fought Super Jinzoningen 17, a shadow walks.
There are pieces of the destroyed Dr. Gero and Dr. Myu. The shadow
makes his hands face the pieces. Red eyes and tongues appear on both his hands. The
pieces of both dead doctors begin to merge. The shadow smirks and flies away.
Over at the son residence a hover car is parked in. Pan is in that car. She opens
the door and gets out of the car. She has on some black high waters with flip flops
and a burgundy shirt. Her hair has grown longer.
She walks over to the house and turns the knob, opening the door .
Videl is sitting on the couch looking at the mail when she sees pan.
“Pan honey! Videl excitedly cried. You finally decided to visit!
“Yeah, well I was busy so I couldn’t.,” Pan replied. But the semester has ended and now
I’m free for the summer!
Videl is wearing a dress that a house wife would wear, along with some slippers. She
has her hair in a pony tail.
Gohan walks in the living room
“Oh pan I didn’t know you were back!,” Gohan said in a surprised tone. So are your
studies going well?
“Well, you know me!,” Pan replied in a kind of show off way. I’m the brains of this
family! “Hey young lady!,” A annoyed gohan replies. Where do you think you get it
from!? Your mother!?
Videl annoyed at what he said smacks him with her slipper.
“Yeah… that proves it…,” Said a sarcastic pan. So where is Gontin?
“He should be coming from school by now.,” Videl replied.
Just then the door opens and a young boy goes inside the house.
“Mom! I’m hom…pan!,” Cried the boy in a happy tone.
He runs over to pan, jumps on her and hugs her.
“Oh big sis!,” Cried the boy. I’ve missed you so much!
“I missed you too little bro!,” Pan said.
Gohan and videl smile.
Meet Gontin! He is gohan and videl’s second child, kid brother of pan. He was born a
short while after goku left with shenlong on that day. He is eight years of age. He knows the
art of fighting to some extent but is frightened very easily.
At the dinner table.
“So mom, dad?,” Pan asked. Is it ok if I take Gontin out to the amusement park?
Videl and Gohan look at one another and then smile.
Yeah mom and dad can she take me!?,” Gontin asked excitedly.
“Sure you can!,” Replied gohan. You’re a responsible adult now.
“Alright!,” Yelled out Gontin. Thank you mom and dad!!
He jumps over the table and hugs both his parents.
Underground, under a big city, there is a laboratory. Within it, there lie blueprints
all around it. Huge chambers with experimented bodies inside them, covered inside
a type of liquid. In front of a desk in the middle of the laboratory stands a creature
who looks identical to both Dr.Gero and Dr.Myu. His name is, Dr.Gyuero.
One of the chambers explodes, a bluish metal liquid pours down on the ground. It
begins to take on a human form.
“Rise up! Your name shall be Carnesher!," Called out Dr.Gyuero.
The bluish metal liquid has taken form. He is a muscular tall man with spiky red
and black hair. His eyes are blue, like bebi’s.
“My name is….carnesher?,” Carnesher asked.
I have a task for you to accomplish.,” Dr.Gyuero ordered. I want you to collect
Samples of a certain powerful DNA. With that DNA, my project will be complete and the new perfect warrior will be among us. I myself don’t know how I got the info of this
DNA, just that I woke up with that knowledge. Come here so that I can add it to
your data bank.
“Yes master.,” He replied.
Pan and gontin are already at the amusement park. They walk out of a ride all soaked in
Water.
“Boy big sis, you scream even louder then a baby.,” Gontin stated.
Pan punches him on the head while she blushes.
“You tell anyone about this and I’ll murder you!,” Pan replied. You hear me!?
”Yeah yeah, lighten up.,” Gontin said. So what should we go to next?
“I don’t know, it’s your choice remember.” Said pan. We have all day, no need to
Rush.
Above the amusement park carnesher is seen to be flying, looking down at the
people using his data bank to identify each of them. He is wearing a green muscle
shirt, black gloves and blue jeans with black boots on him.
“Saiyajins…huh?,” Said Carnesher. I hate saiyajins.
He keeps on looking until he sees Pan and Gontin. He zooms in at pan. His data
claims that she is a match.
“So it’s her.,” Carnesher said. She matches the info I have.
Pan begins to sense a powerful ki, she seems unsettled.
“This strong ki…,”Pan said. Can’t be good.
Carnesher flies over to pan and Gontin and smacks Gontin to a pole. He’s
Unconscious as of now.
“What did you do that for!!?,” Screamed pan.
Pan kicks carnesher multiple times on the face, body and more but they have no effect on him. He simply punches her on her throat, stoping her from being able
to talk and shoots out a blue metal liquid from a part of his right arm. It begins to wrap itself on her. The missing part of his arm grows into more liquid metal but forms itself back into a full arm.
“You are weak. I do hope I am not mistaken in who you are. Normally I would
kill your kind but it’s not part of my new purpose.,” Carnesher said. Anyway,
you will be coming with me.
“:Who is he? What does he want with me, and gontin is hurt. I have to get us
out of this mess!:,” Pan said, while thinking.
Carnesher picks her up and puts her on his shoulder. He prepares to leave when
suddenly his shoulder along with his arm disappear with blood spurring out of him.
Behind him is gontin landing on the ground with pan on his arms. He sets her down and
turns around to looks at carnesher. He looks angry, he has a silver aura surrounding his body.
His eyes themselves are silver.
“:Gontin? What is happening to you…?:,” Pan
asked while thinking.
Carnesher begins to reform his arm and shoulder that were blown off. When he finishes
with that he turns around to face gontin. He looks down over at pan and notices that his
data bank is saying that she is a mismatch. He looks at gontin and his data bank says
that he is a match.
“That boy is it!? But how....?,"Carnesher asked. Boy, you will come with me.
Next time! Carnesher vs. the Silver Saiyajin!